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Saturday, August 29, 2009

Reader/Writer Tidbits -- August 29, 2009

This reading/writing week's tidbits:

Author Robert McKee, author of Story a seminal writing craft book, is interviewed by Debra Eckerling, and talks about the writing process, inciting incidents, and the lost energy of storytelling.

A little different type post, for you detective/mystery writers, picked up from the Writers Digest blog, There Are No Rules: 20 rules for writing detective stories.

Highlighting a grammatical flaw of which I'm guilty--heh-heh! (you'll get the joke in a minute)--editors Theresa and Alicia take on the topic of present participial phrases to help writers cease starting sentences with "--ing" words and become stronger writers. It's a series of blog posts that starts with this one, and goes on for a few days. The kind I have to print, read, and study.

I'm always interested in creative ways in which authors promote and sell their books. One rule of thumb says, "Believe in your book? Sell it yourself". Author/publisher Christopher Herz is selling his book, 10 a day, everyday, on the streets of New York.

Writer's Digest and author Elizabeth Sims give the 7 biggest myths of publishing.

Screenwriter Michael Hauge takes us inside writing romantic comedy. Except I think everything he says here applies to every sub-genre of romance, whether humorous or suspenseful, light-hearted or dark.

Looking for extended market opportunities, authors? How about a video game based on your book?

Don't miss the showdown! Green Apple Books vs. the Amazon Kindle. They're up to round 8, but I just learned of the battle by way of PubRants, so here's the first episode:



Have you noticed folks in the publishing industry have a strange sense of humor?

Have a blessed weekend! Enjoy the waning days of summer.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia
Tampa Bay Writing Examiner

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Thursday, August 27, 2009

100!

Over the last few weeks, I began a countdown. 95, 96, 97, 98...

I finally made it to 100.

Fireworks! Applause! Cheering!

I hear all of that in my head.

What, you want to celebrate with me? 100 what, you ask?

I have 100 story ideas.

See, I keep a file of story ideas. Some are inspired by real-life events. Some by personal experiences. Some come from some place deep within my imagination.

I've collected 100 of these.

For some, I have a sentence. For others, as much as page.

When I started writing, I wondered where my ideas would come from. Oh, I had an idea to start with, but if I wanted a writing career, would I have enough ideas to sustain it?

So I started keeping a file.

I proved to myself long, long before the 100th idea that I'd never have to worry about having something to write about. Life is interesting. There will always be a person, an event, or a theme that will pique my interest.

I've captured 100 of them. Now I just have to prove to myself that I can write the stories. Some are for stories I could write today. Others are big ideas, stories that I know I'm not prepared to write. They require loads of research, and a more crafty writer's hand than I currently possess.

But I love that I have these 100 ideas. My current wip came from this file. I needed a subject, so I scanned the pages and picked the one that resonated most with me at that moment.

It took 3 years to come up with this many ideas. Let's see how many of these stories I can pen (and publish) in the next three.

Do you keep a file of story ideas, possible businesses you might start, or some other list that inspires you in what you do?

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia
Tampa Bay Writing Examiner

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

PS -- A very happy birthday to my hubby. There's only one of him, and he's all mine. Happy Birthday, Babe!

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Wednesday, August 26, 2009

Those Romance Stories Are All The Same

A television commercial for the latest romantic comedy aired amidst the madhouse of homework and preparing dinner yesterday. My husband, hunk that he is, says, "How many times can they tell the same story? Those romantic movies you like are all the same. Gimme a break!"

Uhhh... Does he not realize I write romance?

Hubby has romantic moments, but I wouldn't call him a romantic. Far too pragmatic, too testosterone-fueled for that.

But he humors me from time to time, and will snuggle up next to me while I watch--and he tolerates--some romantic movie. (Usually when there's absolutely nothing else on. No bombs bursting, no dramatic rescues, no superheroes, no thrilling car chases. No sports, no news of interest, no suspense, no mysteries. No documentaries, no biographies. No Law & Order (any version), no Gordon Ramsey, no American Idol,...nothing.)

I tried to explain. Maybe this was my chance to educate, to foster understanding of the world in which my literary heart beats, where my writing lives and breathes. My boys were listening. Yes, this might be it. Oh, this could be good!

"Romance does follow a bit of a formula," I concede as I clean the whole chicken I'm getting ready to roast. "Boy meets girl, boy likes girl, something rises up to interfere with boy and girl getting together, boy and girl overcome obstacles, boy and girl live happily ever after."

"It's all the same," he argues. "Who wants to see that?"

"It is, but it's also different. What keeps it interesting are the people, the different characters in different situations."

"That sucks."

Did I say he wasn't a romantic?

I refrain from spouting facts about the rising sales of romance fiction. Apparently the increasing sprawl of books all over our living space--many of which are romances--doesn't yield any particular messages other than the fact that I read a lot. Nothing wrong with that as long as I keep them out of the way of unsuspecting toes, away from shelves where they might fall upon one's head, and off the seating and the dinner table.

I try a different tack. "You know God is love. So what's wrong with stories about love?" I think this might soften the ground a little because I know he loves God.

"God is love, but they don't mention God anywhere. That's irrelevant."

God is mentioned in a lot of the books I read, many of which are Christian romances. But I just heard my cue. Irrelevant. He's checking out of this conversation. I look up and see his eyes starting to glaze over, so I know my point about Christian romance is for another time, and that's okay. Besides, it was a film commercial that started this, and in truth, I can't honestly say I've ever seen a Christian romance brought to film. (Haven't seen Fireproof yet, and no, Hubby didn't seem particularly interested when I mentioned it a few months back.)

Beneath the surface, he's not wrong. The skeleton of a romance is always the same.

It's a guarantee. And that's why we love 'em.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia
Tampa Bay Writing Examiner

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Monday, August 24, 2009

My Book Therapy Storycrafters Retreat


Every now and then, as a writer, one reads a book that makes her say, "Wow, I'd love to write like that." Imagine my delight to find two such authors, and discover that they not only are friends and critique partners, but also that they both are eager to share their writing know-how with aspiring authors. The two such authors I'm talking about are Susan May Warren and Rachel Hauck, and their My Book Therapy website, where they offer editing services and they've been teaching writers how to craft a story via blog and Ning group for the past year and a half.

Now, they're taking it a step further by putting together a series of retreats for face-to-face writing instruction.

From Here to There –
Going from raw idea to a drawn-out plot

How do you take your ideas and turn them into a story?
How do you know if your idea will sell?
Where do you start?
This working storytellers retreat, set just outside of Minneapolis during the beautiful fall season is designed for a writer who has an idea...but needs help putting it together into a plot.

Come with your idea, leave with a game plan. We’ll teach you story structure, and then go step by step in the character creation and plotting process, explaining how to determine each step, and then show you how to apply it to
your story.

We’ll brainstorm your ideas with you, share essential secrets of storytelling, and finally, you'll take home a filled-out workbook that will act as a map as you write your novel.

For beginners to advanced writers who just want a guide along the way, the From Here to There Storycrafter's Retreat will jumpstart your novel further down the road to publication.

Storycrafting & Coaching Retreat for Writers
Friday, October 23, 2009 1:00 pm -
Sunday, October 25, 2009 11:00 am (Central Time)

Riverwood Inn & Conference Center
10990 95th St. NE
Otsego, MN 55362

For more information, visit here for more information.
To promote this retreat, author Susan May Warren offered to answer questions from the inquiring minds of aspiring authors. Here are the answers to the questions I posed:
  1. Where do you begin, with a character or a plot idea?

    I’m a firm believer that every great story starts with a great character. We remember Jack Ryan, Sidney Bristow, Dr. Richard Kimball, even if we don’t remember the plots behind them. So, I have a unique approach that starts with character identity, and then feeds back into their past with appropriate questions that help us uncover who they are, what their greatest fears are, what their greatest dreams are, and the lie they believe. We use all these elements then to create the perfect plot for our character. Now, that’s not to say that I don’t have an IDEA behind the plot – for example, I’m working on a story right now called Sons of Thunder that came from meeting a Greek man on an airplane and listening to his story. I took that story nugget, started to examine players in the story and came up with a new story perfect for my two sons of thunder.

  2. If you plot, do you plot/outline before you begin writing, or begin and then break at some point to plot?

    I always have the basic plot put together, with the motivations, goals, black moment, and spiritual epiphany of the characters put together. I then write a synopsis so I sort of understand where the story is going...and often I’ll do chapter by chapter summaries as a sort of road map. Then, when I sit down to write the story, I have a game plan...and I let the characters take over from there. Sometimes I have to stop and readjust the plot, but usually it’s just a tweak, not a major story overhaul. I think knowing the entire story gist really helps me in keeping the story going forward and writing it without too many hiccups.

  3. Do you choose the spiritual theme upfront or allow it to unfold as the story evolves and then go back to sure it up?

    Yes, and Yes. Usually I know the lie my character believes – the one that has molded him and pushed him through his life, and then the truth that will set him free (the spiritual epiphany). But then I let go and let God guide me to that epiphany, to the spiritual markers along the way, and finally the intimate tweaks that I need to make the epiphany truly an aha! Moment.
Thanks Susan!

And for more Q&A with author Susan May Warren, check out these other stops on the My Book Therapy Retreat blog tour:

August 25 -- Visit Laura at Lighthouse-Academy
August 26 -- Visit Roxanne at The Writing Road
August 27 -- Visit Julie at The Surrendered Scribe
August 28 -- Visit Audra at Rugged Stories with Heart
August 29 -- Visit Pattie at Fresh-Brewed Writer
August 30 -- Visit Lisa at Musings

I don't know whether I'll make this retreat, but it's definitely heading my list of things I'd really, really like to do!

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia
Tampa Bay Writing Examiner

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Saturday, August 22, 2009

Reader/Writer Tidbits -- August 22, 2009

Working on a revised outline for my story. Feeling better about the opening and about the overall story direction. Fleshing this out a bit more via the outline will help me complete the tale, I believe.

Here are a few tidbits culled from this week's blogosphere:

Debut novelist LK Madigan, whose Flash Burnout releases for the YA market in October, talks about what finding an agent was like for her.

Nothing really new here, but I thought it neat that this writing advice comes from a guy. (Most writing blogs I've seen are by women writers.) Author Larry Brooks offers The Six Core Competencies of Successful Storytelling on a blog called "Men with Pens". Doesn't that sound cool? Here he expands the notion of those competencies a bit, explaining how to cut your manuscript by 20% and love it.

Are you sure you want to be part of a critique group? Author Rachel Hauck sums up a recent chat (in which I took part) about critique groups, some of the pitfalls, and what you should really be looking for from (and giving to) your critique group.

Pill Hill Press is accepting submissions for A WHODUNIT HALLOWEEN anthology. They are looking for mysteries, 1500-6000 words, with the story timeframe at or around Halloween. "Stories should be realistic (meaning that the events could actually occur without the aid of magic or some other fantastical element). They should take place on Earth. They can take place at any time - past, present, future. We are looking for a good variety of bizarre and intricate stories that celebrate the 'whodunit' genre and Halloween." Deadline is April 15, 2010 for a September 2010 release. This indie publisher is also accepting submissions for other anthologies.

Jack Cavanaugh, award-winning author of 25 novels and two screenplays, has started a new writing blog, Word Forge. He envisions "a working writer's studio open to all who love fiction, who get inspired when talking shop, who are committed to honing their fiction skills, and who enjoy hanging out with other writers."

Ten costly mistakes that authors can make, from Michelle Sutton's blog.

Two more days until all the boys are back in school. Lots of back-to-school activities this weekend. Enjoy the weekend!

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia
Tampa Bay Writing Examiner

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Wednesday, August 19, 2009

Kinda Writing...

I hate New Year's resolutions.

Because we all know what happens to New Year's resolutions. Somewhere between January 1st and as early as January 3rd, they get thrown out the window. Most folks try to hang on, maybe until as far into the year as Valentine's Day, but how many people in August can say that they've held on to their New Year's resolutions?

For that reason, I don't do New Year's resolutions.

But I did start the year with some goals that I'd given quite a bit of thought in the preceding months. This year, in an effort to make my writing goals more attainable, I simplified them. They summed up to write, submit, and write some more. Specifically, I planned to finish the story I was working on by the end of April, to submit to two main contests for the purposes of feedback primarily, and to start and finish another story by the end of December.

Usually by now, I've reported on my goal progress a few times. I realize that I haven't once reported how I'm doing against my goals. (Did you notice?)

Not a good sign.

For one thing, it means my goals haven't been very "top of mind", a phrase used with brand recognition, meaning that the brand is right on the top of one's mind when asked about that particular type of product. On the tip of the tongue, so to speak.

If I'm not thinking about my goals, I'm probably not making great progress toward them.

I'm not.

I didn't finish the story that was in progress at the start of the year, although it won't leave me alone and I think I'll go back to it. I did submit to two contests though, using that same story for one and a story I'd been working on last year for the other. I got great feedback. One out of three goals ain't... Ah, in truth, let's just say, it's not great.

I started another story, which I've been working on this summer. I'm renewing my commitment to finish it by the end of this year.

Of course, I'm well aware that I'm not writing as much as I would like. That's why I cut down my book reviews for August, to increase my writing time. I've made commitments for September and October, but I think I'll take November and December off to focus on writing too. The discipline of writing really needs some attention from me.

Maybe that's the only writing goal I'll have next year.

At least I am losing weight. Slooowly. 26 lbs off since January.

Did you set specific goals for this year, writing or otherwise? How are you doing?

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia
Tampa Bay Writing Examiner

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Saturday, August 15, 2009

Reader/Writer Tidbits -- August 15, 2009

Usually by Thursday of any given week, I've amassed a bunch of information from across the blogosphere that I want to share. But this week, as of this writing moment, on Friday morning, I had nothing.

Not one piece of share-worthy information? How could that be?

I'm sure I read blog posts by aspiring authors, published authors, editors, agents, publicists, news organizations and any other writing-related source that someone else might benefit from. But nothing struck me with the usual "a-ha, have to include this one".

So unless a host of tidbits reveal themselves between now and Saturday, there won't be any tidbits this week. Let's see what happens below this line:

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Last chance to register for SORMAG's Online Conference, scheduled for August 23-29, 2009. The registration deadline is today, August 15th. Check out the lineup of presenters and register here.

Writing for kids, tweens or teens? Let author Mitali Perkins and the Twitter community throw you a "Twitter Book Party" on your release date. There're book parties slated through July 2010 already but plenty of dates still available. And if you're on Twitter and like to promote books, join in the fun by signing up to "Auto-Party".

Aside from that, enjoy the weekend! Trying to get all of the handwritten work I've done in fits and spurts over the summer typed up. Any plans?

99 and counting... Almost there...

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia
Tampa Bay Writing Examiner

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Thursday, August 13, 2009

Understanding The Hero's Journey


Again I recently found myself muddling through my current wip. I got an idea and then began building upon it. I discovered and named my characters, and spent some time getting to know them. I did a sketchy outline and began writing. (I have absolutely no idea how many words or scenes or chapters because I didn't want to get hung up on that. Besides, at this point, it's mostly all hand-written.)

Still, I felt stuck. Like the story was missing something.

I spent some more time tossing around my characters in my head. That always helped, freeing me up to write some more.

Then I got stuck again.

Usually, at this second juncture, is when I begin to doubt the story, to procrastinate about writing, to consider putting it to the side.

But I happened upon something that I've heard a number of authors reference as a framework for storytelling, and decided to take a look: The Hero's Journey. Literary professor Joseph Campbell posited that all stories follow a similar framework, which he outlined in The Hero of a Thousand Faces. Building upon Campbell's work, Hollywood executive Christopher Vogler applied Campbell's structure to films against a backdrop of the three-act story structure in his book, The Writer's Journey and outlined these twelve steps:
    The Hero's Journey
  1. The Ordinary World ... limited awareness of the problem

  2. Call To Adventure ... Increased awareness

  3. Refusing The Call ... Reluctance to Change

  4. Meeting with the Mentor ... Overcoming Reluctance

  5. Crossing the First Threshold ... Committing to Change

  6. Tests, Allies, Enemies ... Experimenting with the First Change

  7. Approaching the Innermost Cave ... Preparing for Big Change

  8. The Supreme Ordeal ... Attempting Big Change

  9. Reward (Seizing the Sword) ... Consequences of the attempt

  10. The Road Back ... Re-dedication to Change

  11. Resurrection ... Final Attempt at Big Change

  12. Return with the Elixir ... Final Mastery of the Problem
Or, as Mr. Vogler summarizes it, The Hero's Journey can be read this way:
"The hero is introduced in his ORDINARY WORLD where he receives the CALL TO ADVENTURE. He is RELUCTANT at first to CROSS THE FIRST THRESHOLD where he eventually encounters TESTS, ALLIES and ENEMIES. He reaches the INNERMOST CAVE where he endures the SUPREME ORDEAL. He SEIZES THE SWORD or the treasure and is pursued on the ROAD BACK to his world. He is RESURRECTED and transformed by his experience. He RETURNS to his ordinary world with a treasure, boon, or ELIXIR to benefit his world."
This made sense to me, and opened me up to whole new ways of looking at my story.

One immediate thing I got from studying The Hero's Journey was a clearer understanding of three-act storytelling. I immediately understood how the 12 steps fell across the three acts:
  • Act I -- The Ordinary World, Call To Adventure, Refusing The Call, and Meeting with the Mentor

  • Act II -- Crossing the First Threshold, Tests, Allies, Enemies, Approaching the Innermost Cave, The Supreme Ordeal, Reward

  • Act III -- The Road Back, Resurrection, Return with the Elixir
With this information, I sat down and began to lay out my story according to the 12-steps. Now this is not intended to be a rigid thing. An author can omit steps as makes sense for her story. I got a bit fuzzy in steps 6 through 10, which of course, represent the "dreaded middle". But I have way more clarity than I did before I began.

When digging into the Vogler's The Hero's Journey, there are questions at the end of each step to cause the author to think more deeply about her characters and her story.

I don't anticipate answering every question, or that by answering as many as I can, that I will craft the perfect outline from which to write this story.

In fact, rather than dwelling on The Hero's Journey construct--like I need one more thing to distract me--I've already written more as a result of what I've learned, and I'll keep writing until I again feel stuck.

Then, I think I'll consult The Hero's Journey for that stage in the story to see what I might not be considering that might help me to get unstuck.

Think about some of your favorite stories or movies and see if The Hero's Journey applies. Have you used The Hero's Journey in your writing before? If you plot your stories, do you use any particular framework?

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia
Tampa Bay Writing Examiner

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Tuesday, August 11, 2009

What's Wrong With Free?

This post began as a comment to another blogger's post. When I realized I had more to say than I wanted to leave in the comments, I decided to talk about it here.

The topic? Free books offered online by publishers.

When publisher Hachette recently asked for feedback on its free book giveaway via Twitter, some wondered whether it was possible for authors to make money if publishers start doing this.

Agent Janet Knobbel Grant picked up the dialogue with a post entitled "Trendspotting: Free", in which she wonders why readers would ever buy books if they could have them for free. In fact, Janet's post turned into a series so be sure to read parts two and three also, in which she discussed ways that publishers might make free book giveaways work.

Here's how I see it:

Businesses have always offered loss leaders to reel customers in and get them to purchase higher priced items or simply additional volume. That's what offering free books, or anything else, on the Internet is intended to do. Worked for me, introducing me to an author I would not have otherwise read. I would consider buying her books now whereas before I would have walked or scrolled past them.

Moreover, reading is addictive, at least for some of us. If free books--on the Internet, by way of cell phone, or any other delivery mechanism--gets more people reading, at least a percentage of those people will enjoy it enough to begin investing in it, i.e. buying books.

Now, publishers do have to control what is offered and how frequently, in order to meet these objectives. If they offer too many books for free and/or offer free books too frequently, then yes, buyers become accustomed to getting free books and will expect them.

It's the same thing that has happened with S&H fees on the Internet. In the beginning, everyone wanted to charge free shipping & handling. After a while, it was only for larger purchases. Now with the recession, some retailers are going to opposite ends of the boxing match called the consumer market, offering free S&H on everything or never offering free S&H. Most retailers are simply confused at this point, as are consumers. But consumers are also resentful because most remember when they could get almost anything on the Internet with no extra chargers.

So, as with anything, the order of the day is "strategic moderation". (There's a new corporate buzzword for you.)

I love free, online books. Harlequin has offered free reads for years. Granted, these are not full-length novels but they are fun, short stories for quick pleasure. The intent? To get you to buy the books. Most recently, in honor of their 60th anniversary, the company offered a selection of free novels, full versions. I downloaded every one of them that I hadn't already read. Why? Because I know I enjoy Harlequin novels. Because here was a chance for me to read authors that I probably wouldn't commit my hard-earned dollars to otherwise. But if I like their work after reading these novels, they move to my buy list.

That's what happened with author Mary Kay Andrews. HarperCollins, to promote Ms. Andrews most recent release, offered readers the opportunity to read the book Hissy Fit online for free. This was not a download but access to the book on their website via Adobe Digital Editions.

Prior to doing so, I'd have completely ignored both books. Instead, I read Hissy Fit, almost in a single sitting. It was a Friday night, I was restless, and I began reading. I wound up staying up way too late, then finishing the book on Saturday, all 464 pages within 24 hours.

Yes, it was a good book--good story, well told and funny. I enjoy southern fiction and this was a lovely, engaging tale.

It's highly likely, as a result, that I'll buy a Mary Kay Andrews book in the future because of that opportunity.

What HarperCollins did right?
  1. Made available one of Ms. Collins' previous titles, not the current one. Hissy Fit was released originally in 2005.

  2. They gave access to the entire book. They could have given an excerpt, maybe only a few chapters, but for a previously released book, that's not so enticing. That might work better for a current release.

  3. They clearly tied the free read opportunity to the new release promotion. It was explicit and obvious why they were giving readers access to this older book. So we could buy the new book. I didn't, but I'm betting some percentage of the people who took advantage of this opportunity did. And now Ms. Andrews is way up on my authors-to-look-for list. I know her name, I know how I learned of her name, and I won't forget. (Of course, if I hadn't loved the book, my brain would be just as clearly stamped in a negative way, ruining any future sales potential.)
I had a similar opportunity reading a Julia Quinn novel, The Duke and I, that was offered in the same way last year. Ms. Quinn is quite prolific having produced now eight novels in The Bridgerton series, and I think, three or four in the Bridgerton 2nd Epilogues series. The Duke and I was the first in the series. So giving me a chance to read it for free, almost eight years later, was simply to introduce me to Ms. Quinn as an author and the Bridgerton series with the hopes that I'd get hooked. If they weren't historicals, I'd have made my way through the entire first series by now.

Lest you think I only read the free books and never buy, I've purchased books by Adrienne Byrd, Kathryn Springer, Holly Jacobs, Shirley Jump, Leslie Kelly and Arlene James because I first became acquainted with them as authors via free online reads. Then, there's the host of authors I now buy and read because I first read their books by way of the library--the best free book source in the world--or by receiving their books for review purposes.

In my book (pun intended), there's nothing wrong with free.

Have you read any free reads online (or via any electronic device)? Do you think publishers should use this strategy more or less? Do you think authors are at risk when publishers offer books for free?

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia
Tampa Bay Writing Examiner

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Monday, August 10, 2009

Reader/Writer Tidbits -- August 10, 2009

Forgot to put these in scheduled status on Friday so we'll begin this week with a few tidbits. -- PW

First, an update on the controversy over the cover art for Liar. Just days ago, I talked about this controversy and some recent strange book cover happenings here and here. After an online uproar over the use of a Caucasian model on the cover of a book about an biracial girl, the cover art has been changed by publisher, Bloomsbury Children's Books.

Sometimes aspiring authors need help, someone to hold their hand and point them in the right direction. But which way is the right way? What aspiring authors really need is permission to head down whatever path they're on, to choose another path should they find one more interesting, and to get to the finish line, well, whenever they get there. Permission to write. Author Allison Brennan gives aspiring writers permission...to break all the rules, and write.

If you're not reading the blog, Pimp My Novel, you should be. This week, Eric referred to literary agent Ethan Ellenberg's discourse on how book royalties really work. If you've ever wanted to understand this aspect of the publishing industry--and maybe consider whether you got a good deal--read this article.

An unusual vantage point in the publishing industry is that of the writer's significant other. (Is that still a valid term?) A guest blogger over at Nathan Bransford's blog shares what it's like to be the writer's partner.

There's news about e-books and e-readers every day now. This week, Sony announced the launch of its new Reader line, featuring the Reader Pocket edition and the Reader Touch edition, starting at $199. Now that's a price that's going to draw attention, I think. Much cheaper than a Kindle...

Deep POV, deep POV... This is almost a chant across writing groups these days. But author and writing instructor Alicia Rasley tells us why, just maybe, deep POV may not be right for you.

One more thing. 98 and counting... When I reach 100, I'll let you in on what I'm talking about. Any guesses?

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia
Tampa Bay Writing Examiner

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Friday, August 07, 2009

Featured Book: The Last Woman Standing by Tia McCollors

Today's featured book comes from Tia McCollors, author of A Heart of Devotion, Zora's Cry, and The Truth About Love. Tia's brand of Christian fiction is grounded yet light-hearted, both comforting and inspiring.

Her latest release, The Last Woman Standing is available now, and the main character, Lynette Bowers, wanted to shed some light on her dilemma:

Lynette Bowers – A Divorce Decree Doesn’t End The Feelings

Ace shouldn’t be making me feel like this. You know. The butterfly feeling. The heart-skipping-a-beat kind of feeling. My signature on the divorce decree was supposed to cut my physical and emotional ties with him. Right? Now God’s still, small voice is speaking even louder than any piece of papered issued by that courtroom judge four years ago.

But is it worth it? Is it worth exposing my heart when both he and Sheila could very well laugh in my face?

On one hand, Ace and I have a history together – and two teenage daughters. But on the other hand, Sheila has beauty, his attention, and a few more baby-making years. I don’t even want to think about it. If Ace marries Sheila and they have a baby, I hope he doesn’t expect us all to be one happy family.

Purchase your copy of The Last Woman Standing to find out if Lynette will reconnect with her ex-husband.

THE LAST WOMAN STANDING BLOG TOUR GIVEAWAY

Tia McCollors is the author of four Women's Fiction books. Read the question below to see if you provide the character's name?

What is the name of Monet Sullivan’s long-time (but unequally yoked) love interest in Zora’s Cry?

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Peace & Blessings,
Patricia
Tampa Bay Writing Examiner

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Thursday, August 06, 2009

Much Ado About Book Covers, Pt 2

Yesterday I talked specifically about the Liar book cover controversy. (I posted it a bit late so if you missed it, take a look.)

But as I researched that story, I discovered that issues with book covers abound.

Book covers have been a source of frustration and controversy probably since books were first published. Some authors get to provide some input as to what they think a cover for their story should look like, but as I understand it, authors rarely get the final say, and they are often surprised by the final product.

A publishing industry insider talks about the potential impact of cover art on book sales, according to Pimp My Novel here, and gives some examples of some he was none to thrilled with.

Being surprised by a cover or not liking it are one thing. But, it's a whole other thing when the book cover results in these kinds of experiences:

What happened to best-selling author Brenda Novak's newest release? Could you imagine a cover that appears to be missing your name? Read the rest of the story on agent Kristin Nelson's site, Pub Rants.

Exoticism of Asian Book Covers

Then there's author Sonya Chung's experience with book covers...


And the mistaken identity book cover that sort of looked like a new release from author Dan Brown...but wasn't.

Not only are authors upset. One artist is suing a major house over unauthorized use of a photo of a famous sculpture.

Then there are the two books released earlier this year, with near identical book covers.

Oh what a tangled web! Authors, if you're happy with your book covers, consider yourselves blessed.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia
Tampa Bay Writing Examiner

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Wednesday, August 05, 2009

Much Ado About Book Covers, Pt 1

A furor arose recently about the cover for a new YA book, Liar by Justine Larbalestier. The blurb on Amazon is pretty intriguing:

Micah will freely admit that she’s a compulsive liar, but that may be the one honest thing she’ll ever tell you. Over the years she’s duped her classmates, her teachers, and even her parents, and she’s always managed to stay one step ahead of her lies. That is, until her boyfriend dies under brutal circumstances and her dishonesty begins to catch up with her. But is it possible to tell the truth when lying comes as naturally as breathing? Taking readers deep into the psyche of a young woman who will say just about anything to convince them—and herself—that she’s finally come clean, Liar is a bone-chilling thriller that will have readers see-sawing between truths and lies right up to the end. Honestly.

Sounds interesting, right? On to the controversy...

The book cover features a photo of a straight-haired girl, probably Caucasian or biracial.

Except I'm told the character is African-American with curly or kinky hair.

Wuh?

Now, I haven't read the book so I can't opine as to why the publisher and cover artist went the way they did.

But I do get the furor because it's been around for a long time.

It has to do with whether African-Americans are considered beautiful, especially when their physical features veer away from a European-centric ideal. This controvery rears its ugly head in pop culture all the time, from magazine covers to television commercials. Now, we have an example on the front of a much-hyped book.

I'm wondering whether the publisher things books with African-Americans on the cover have less appeal to non African-American readers. Do they?

Book covers can help--or hurt--a book's sales. If the artwork is offensive or unappealing in any manner, it might put off readers who would otherwise buy the book.

Some publishing lines lean more to using faces on their cover, while others seem to prefer the more abstract or pictures of inanimate objects, landscapes, etc.

O Magazine, Oprah's self-titled publication, always has her face on the cover. Oprah's a unique force to be reckoned with, and some might argue that by way of her success, she has somehow transcended race. But her face on the cover certainly isn't hurting her sales.

Here are some recent books with African-American faces on the cover, not all of them written by African-Americans. Have you ever been turned off by the ethnicity of the cover model? What about these covers? These are the covers of books I've enjoyed in the last year, or soon-to-be-released titles I'm anticipating, some YA titles, some for the adult market.

What about these?

So what was the publisher thinking? Since the book is about a character who lies about nearly everything, is a cover photo that offers up a deception appropriate, as some have suggested?

If a book entitled Liar had had an African-American character portrayed on the cover, would some argue that the artwork reinforced negative stereotypes in some manner?

Maybe all books should be covered as they used to package generic food product, a white background with dark blue or black print. (Did you notice that Wal-mart has recently started using a similar look for its Great Value line? Yuck!) This would eliminate any subjective bias on the part of the buyer who would have to go off the blurb and the writing (and of course, online reviews).

Author Mitali Perkins talked about cover art as it relates to race in a lengthy article published earlier this year by Publishers Weekly.

Finally, here's what the author, Justine Larbalestier, has to say about all this. But, in truth, her initial response was a tad less outraged, even delighted, I might say. Actually, I think the more intriguing story is simply this Australian author who refers to Americans as "USians" and has not lived much of her life in the United States. How was she inspired to write this book set in NYC with this set of characters?

It seems, however, that this cover art controversy is but the tip of the iceberg. When I began crafting this post over a week ago, nearly every day, another book cover controversy cropped up. So tomorrow, Much Ado About Book Covers, Pt 2.

What say you about book covers? Tend to love them or hate them? Do they influence your purchase decision? Based on what you know of the Liar cover flap, should this book have featured an African-American model on the cover?

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia
Tampa Bay Writing Examiner

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Tuesday, August 04, 2009

Is Honesty The Best Policy?

I read a lot of books.

I review books for two online sites, not including the mini-reviews I post here on my blog.

I write, although I'm as yet unpublished in novel length. But I'm working at it, and learning more craft every day.

So what's an aspiring novelist who reviews the stories of published novelists to do when she really doesn't enjoy a particular book?

Now, let me say that there are a myriad of reasons for not enjoying a book:
  1. I'm not mentally ready for it. Maybe I'm sleepy or don't feel well. I just can't get my head into the story, and therefore I find myself sort of sleepwalking my way through.

    In this case, I almost always put the book down, and come back to it later. Unless I'm up against a review deadline. Then, I might have to push through and hope for the best.

  2. The story isn't plausible.

    The story just doesn't wash for me. I happen to know something about (fill in the blank) or I can't in my wildest imagination envision (fill in the blank). If the author writes so well that I can get past my disbelief, I'll hang in there but if not, it makes for a less than pleasurable reading experience.

  3. I don't like the characters.

    All geared up to like the story and the plot works. But I hate the characters. Not a mere "don't care for". I'm talking intense dislike that makes me contemplate heinous crimes while I'm reading.

  4. The writing is, uh, well, pedestrian. Boring, or less than skilled.

    This, more often than not, is the sticky wicket with which I'm presented. The plot is okay; the characters are pretty cool. But the writing as a whole is just, well, average. Maybe less than average. Nothing magical. Nothing even slightly beyond ordinary. Don't want to read it; don't want to waste my time. I will find myself re-writing sentences, if not whole passages, in my head, thinking "If I'd written this, I'd have said it this way..."


How did it get published? I don't know but, I hate when this happens (which thankfully, is actually rare.) It's tough. Because I believe in my heart that every writer does the best he or she can. I wonder whether the author should read more, to, as Chris Roerden, author of "Don't Sabotage Your Submission" says, "absorb the sound of good writing".

I wonder whether the author has spent much time studying the craft of writing. This is particularly true when the story is all "telling" with little "showing", uses loads of passive, weak verbs, and commits Novice Writer 101 faux pas' like describing every aspect each character from head to toe when first introduced.

Yet, even in the face of writing that may be technically correct but simply boring, the reality of the situation never fails me.

The author is published; I am not. Of course, that's a beast for a whole other analysis. Let's suffice it to say the author has simply progressed to perch where I too shall someday rest.

Back to the topic at hand. I need to review a book I didn't like. What do I say?

I try to be honest in my reviews. Honesty is important.

If I absolutely loved a book, you'll know.

If I enjoyed a book but it didn't sing for me, you can tell by my review.

If I really can't find anything nice to say, and this has happened, albeit very rarely, I say nothing. I contact the review site and tell them why I cannot write a review for the book. I know some reviewers' hearts don't skip a beat when presented with a chance to write a scathing review, but I can't do it.

For one thing, the author has feelings. If she really did do the best she could, and a publisher gave her a measure of validation by publishing her work, who am I to say her writing doesn't meet my standards?

Sometimes I'll note, after a couple of these, that a particular publisher's offerings just don't seem to be up to snuff. Is it the writer's fault? Editorial? A combination?

And another thing... Remember what I said about being up on that perch one day? One day I too will seek book reviews. I would hope that reviewers will be honest with me...in a kind manner.

Because, there's a difference, in my mind, between a book review and a writing critique. I'm much more blunt in a critique. I try to approach book reviews, however, from a reader's vantage point, not that of a writer. Thus, although the lack of an engaging writing style may hamper my literary enjoyment, I try not to comment on those aspects of the book in my review. Rather, I try to focus on the characters, the plot, and the theme, and whether a reader might enjoy the story.

There's one other consideration I didn't anticipate when I began reviewing books. My circle of writing "friends" continues to grow. If I don't want to give a negative review to the book of someone I've never heard of, I certainly don't want to give one to a friend.

But am I doing the people who read book reviews a disservice? Do they maybe want to know that the writing wasn't so hot, so that they can spend their hard-earned dollars on a different book with a better review? I wonder about this.

Occasionally, I'm asked what I really think, in which case, I will provide that feedback to the author through private channels. No need to skewer someone publicly. And even then, I find the kindest words I can--and give examples to deliver my feedback.

But when I really enjoy a book, which I'm glad to say happens much more frequently, you'll know. When the prose engenders thoughts of a bestseller or Nobel Prize for Literature--okay, that might be a stretch--I'm crowing from the rooftops. I want everyone I know to read that book. So I'm singing, I'm standing on my hands, I'm dancing, I'm wearing a sign, I'm blogging...whatever it takes.

I pray one day someone will do that for my book.

If you write book reviews, how do you handle books you don't care much for? If you're a reader, do book reviews influence your reading choices?

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia
Tampa Bay Writing Examiner

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Monday, August 03, 2009

Making The Most of Writing Opportunities

Only one book feature in August. Thought I signed up for zero, but it seems there is one later this week, a book I've been looking forward to reading.

Beyond that, though, there will be none. Zilch.

Oh, I'll still do a little reading. I've got plenty to keep my literary taste buds satisfied. But not too much.

I'm taking a break from featuring books because that takes the pressure off the reading. If I do, I do. If I don't, oh well...

Taking the pressure off the reading presents an opportunity.

A writing opportunity.

And writing is exactly what I intend to do, along with managing the usual "back-to-school" crazies and getting ready for my in-laws 50th wedding anniversary celebration Labor Day weekend.

I've got incentive to write. For one thing, I will NOT close out another year without a finished manuscript. My ego is too big to continue talking about writing yet not move forward. (In fact, I took some big steps forward this year, which I'm proud of, so I'm really talking about capitalizing on momentum.)

Two, my new crit group is a great bunch of ladies. I've been critiquing for them, but I want to put them to work so they won't think, "Hey, she's wonderful, but does she actually WRITE anything?"

Three, I had an interesting experience recently of which I intend to take full advantage. In a blog discussion about a book I'd read and loved, I posted my opinions as to why I thought the book was worthy of the kudos the author was receiving in some corners whereas others were incredulous about the author's work. The literary agent for the book reached out to me and we began a dialogue. She has offered to read my work, either for advice or possible representation. I committed to send her something before the end of the year, to which she responded that was okay.

I can tell you about this in general terms because my book opinions are all over the Internet, but I won't tell you the agent or even the book (because if you're as good an online sleuth as me you'd find her in a minute). Clearly, this is not an opportunity to pass up. Reputable agent from a respected agency who reps a number of authors I enjoy. Like I said, too good to pass up.

So August will be about writing, back-to-school, and anniversaries (oh yeah, Hubby and I celebrate our 18th later this month).

Got plans for the month?

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia
Tampa Bay Writing Examiner

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Saturday, August 01, 2009

Reader/Writer Tidbits -- August 1, 2009

It's August! We're officially on the downside of summer, looking at a flurry of back-to-school active over the next few weeks and wondering whether any major storms will hit this year or if we'll have another month or so of great beach weekends.

If you are interested in submitting to Dorchester Publishing, one of the few publishers who still accepts unagented submissions, you should read editor Leah Hultenschmidt's blog, Romantic Reads. She talks about books, publishing, the submission process...all the things you'd need to research if you want to work with her. On her July 22nd post, you'll find the 2009 RWA spotlight presentation.

As much as I read, free book offerings don't usually escape me, but here's one I missed. Sony has teamed up with Google to offer free ebook downloads of over 500,000 titles. You don't have to own a Sony E-Reader; you simply have to download the software, then Happy Reading!

Recently, I told you about Barnes & Noble's new ebook store. Well now B&N also is teaming up with AT&T to offer free Wi-Fi in all stores. Is B&N starting to become a very friendly new media place?

Authors, want to see your books in a mass-market retailer? Target's book programs are turning some titles into big sellers.

And did you know that publishing operates much like a garage sale does? Thanks to author Toni McGee Causey who wrote this a few months back and author Chicki Brown who pointed this piece out to me.

Sorry for the late breaking notice on this one but I just learned about it myself. Fans of T. L. Hines--or new readers who enjoy quirky suspense stories--can get a free download of his new book, Faces in the Fire, by simply uploading a picture to be included in the mosaic of faces he's building to promote the book. And there's an opportunity to win cool, action figure prizes. Go here for more info, but don't hesitate. The free download ends August 2nd.

Lastly, I got an email from a fellow this week who has a blog I think might be of interest to the writers in the group (and maybe anyone who reads my blog). It's called Romance for Men, where readers can pick up family-friendly tips on how men can become more romantic.

Enjoy the weekend!

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia
Tampa Bay Writing Examiner

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.